Wednesday 27 March 2013

Daffodils.

Green fingers
Reaching up
To the sky
Encircling
Yellow spear.
Breaking through
The snow white
Covering
On the ground.

Like I said, I'm new to this. What do you call a poem with 3 syllables to a line?
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 March 2013 at 13:21

    I'd say that there is some evidence of William Carlos Williams' influence, but beyond that, I don't think this has a name. Maybe you should invent one?

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  2. Brian Miller27 March 2013 at 13:48

    i dont know a name but i like the visuals....our snow is melting today...few remnants and i am looking forward to the brilliance of those daffodils...

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  3. dragyonfly4 April 2013 at 21:27

    It is always so when you put up your winter clothes (or tires) that you must have another cold snap. Three syllable lines we shall call pastamissus-literation.

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